Prisoner's Second MPF APp

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Prisoner's Second MPF APp

Post  Oliver Rusciano on Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:39 am

Steam Name And ID:Prisoner357 [TSG]

In-Game Main Character Name:Muhhamed Ibn Al'sad 0: 0:4626383

How long have you played on the server?:about 35-40 hours of gameplay

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):It was my ordinary
at the hospital helping hurt and sick people then all the sudden i hear loud bangs and explosions then i run out side and
see the event. I tried to get some hurt people out but they got shot only reason i made it out of there is because i
crawled out a airvent and went out side and hid in a nearby building. Then i eventualy found my way to a refuge camp
there i helped the sick and wounded. The camp was raided soon later there durung the raid i was trying to get my medical supplies
, and there was a cp with a combat knife and he cut my right side of my face then i was knocked out.

Then i awoke in city23 I recieved my clothes and suitcase then i was faced to the city. I bought a apartment and the
rebels burnt the appartments down so i went and worked as a janitor for the local Foto shop. The combine arrested the owner
for affairs with Drug trafficing. Then i was left with nothing so i got moved to city18. In this city i am treated alot
nicer and i also became friends with a combine so i decided to sighn up and forget the past.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):/Citizen.
/yes?
/apply.
/(he applies)
/on the wall.
/me searches man and finds Level 1 contriban.
/citizen is this yours?
/yes sorry sir.
/you know what this means right?
/what?
/amputation.
/me takes man to amputation room.
/me amputates and cleans up the mess.

Why do you want to be MPF? To protect the citizens,and to catch the anti citizen. Also to stop rebels.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?:Yes

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?:Yes
Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,

and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue.

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Re: Prisoner's Second MPF APp

Post  Ethan Mars on Sat Mar 03, 2012 5:16 am

Not really my business or authority to say, but it needs work.
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So.

Post  RustyRazor on Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:12 am

It really needs work, indeed.

The grammar is not really well used, and the backstory is quite poor.

Plus, the /mes are poor, too.

I don't want to deny this already, so I'll just stick with a -Support.

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Re: Prisoner's Second MPF APp

Post  Burningfox6 on Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:49 pm

Denied, who the fuck put this in Accepted?
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Location : Canada, eh?

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