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Post  Combine Buster on Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:55 pm

Steam Name And ID: Combine Buster.

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:31562039

In-Game Main Character Name: Dimitri Volkov

How long have you played on the server?: 2 weeks.

Character Backstory:I used to be a war veteran you know, at the time of speaking I’m 57 years old and 1.81 meters high. I fought at operation Black Mesa, it was a mess down there. The first time I came there the only thing I saw were rotten corpses, it made me puke. We were just walking when my friend got ambushed by a headcrab, he was dead almost instantly, but I fought the creatures till there were no more, at least I thought, I got flanked and almost died, but I was lucky a new team arrived and saved me. They brought me to a chopper, that took me to a hospital somewhere. When I was fired from the hospital, I saw something in the sky, it looked like a portal, then I realized that the war had begun.

A few of the combine brought me too a train towards this city. Once in the city it was not long until I discovered how the combine acted, but when the combine had to fight the resistance, they recruited humans to help them keep the city safe. I thought it would be safer because of them being human, well I thought wrong. They were just as cruel as the combine, but I admired their power it reminded me of the army. Then I thought by myself, it's time to help again.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):
Prepares stunstick.
Sets stunstick to high voltage.
Upholsters pistol and is prepared to fire.
Holsters his weapon.
Picks up unconscious citizen.
Sits in the chair.
Slams the table.
Flicks off the stun stick.
Locks the cell.
Unlocks the cell.

Combine Buster: Hey citizen stop running!
Citizen: F*** you cop.
Combine Buster: To the wall citizen.
Citizen: F*** you
Combine Buster: /Me Flicks on his stunstick
Citizen: Okay, okay
*Citizen faces wall*
Combine Buster: Apply
*Citizen applies*
Combine Buster: Tell me your CID.
*citizen tells CID*
*Combine Buster re-educates the citizen*
Combine Buster: Okay you can go citizen.


Why do you want to be MPF?: I would like to be a MPF because It seems like it would be a great rp experience to walk a mile in the combines shoes and enjoy passive RP.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes i do.

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?: Yes i do.



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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 10:41 am

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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  mhofnagel on Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:31 pm

Spelling errors, as well as grammar issues.

EDIT: Fix those, then I'll look again <3
EDIT2: Removed "- Support"


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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:35 pm

I edited the backstory.
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Post  mhofnagel on Fri Apr 13, 2012 1:38 pm

Hmmmmmm. Redacting my previous judgement;

+ Support

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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Spectre Once-ler on Fri Apr 13, 2012 2:53 pm

Combine Buster wrote:Steam Name And ID: Combine Buster.

Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:31562039

In-Game Main Character Name: Dimitri Volkov

How long have you played on the server?: 2 weeks.

Character Backstory: I used to be a war veteran you know, at the time of speaking I’m 57 years old and 1.81 meters high. I fought at operation Black Mesa, it was a mess down there. The first time I came there the only thing I saw were rotten corpses, it made me puke. We were just walking when my friend got ambushed by a headcrab, he was dead almost instantly, but I fought the creatures till there were no more, at least I thought, I got flanked and almost died, but I was lucky a new team arrived and saved me. They brought me to a chopper, that took me to a hospital somewhere. When I was fired from the hospital, I saw something in the sky, it looked like a portal, then I realized that the war had begun. A few of the combine brought me too a train towards this city. Once in the city it was not long until I discovered how the combine acted, but when the combine had to fight the resistance, they recruited humans to help them keep the city safe. Then I thought by myself, it's time to help again.

I really like the backstory, but it's not two paragraphs, only one. We need to be correct. Wink

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):
Prepares stunstick.
Sets stunstick to high voltage.
Upholsters pistol and is prepared to fire.
Holsters his weapon.
Cuts off the thumb of the anti-citizen.
Picks up unconscious citizen.
Sits in the chair.
Slams the table.
Flicks off the stun stick.
Locks the cell.
Unlocks the cell.

Well, a bunch of actions, alright. An RP scenario would had been great and given more life to it.

Why do you want to be MPF?: I would like to be a MPF because It seems like it would be a great rp experience to walk a mile in the combines shoes and enjoy passive RP.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes i do.

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?: Yes i do.


NEUTRAL until revised.
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Mutual on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:04 pm

Combine Buster wrote:Cuts off the thumb of the anti-citizen.

I hope you are not doing that as a recruit or anywhere near 05 to at least 03...
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:06 pm

No i wont.
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Mutual on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:08 pm

I will stay Neutral. For the reasons that Spectre Once-ler said
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:15 pm

Edited again.
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:19 pm

Sorry i forgot to edit the actions.
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Fri Apr 13, 2012 3:32 pm

Made an rp scenario.
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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  Combine Buster on Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:18 am

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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  mhofnagel on Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:39 am

Combine Buster wrote:bumb

>Sad DON'T BUMP YOUR THREAD! FOX WILL GET TO YOU WHEN HE CAN!








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Re: Combine Buster's MPF application.

Post  L.Lawliet on Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:59 am

-SUPPORT
Lack of effort in the backstory.
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