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MPF Application New one

Post  Gimti on Wed Apr 11, 2012 2:37 pm

Steam Name And ID:Lollan

Steam ID:Steam_0:1:22993362

In-Game Main Character Name:Robin Smith

How long have you played on the server?: Few Weeks

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):Robin Smith was born in Chicago, Illinois. He was born August 19, 1976. Robin Smith lived an average life until the age of 12. His Father ( Jared Smith) was a police officer before the Combine invasion, and his mother was a social worker. One day his father came home from work, and found illegal substances in Amanda Smith's (Robin's Mom) Purse. Even though Robin's father did not want to do it, he had to detain Amanda. But Amanda fought back, forcing Jared Smith to use non-lethal force. Jared Smith shot Amanda with a Taser, and she fell to the ground. As Jared was escorting Amanda into the squad car, she told Robin not to worry, that it would all be sorted out. Robin lived with his grandparents for three years, because his father could not take care of him alone. Jared blamed Robin for Amanda's habits and hated Robin for it, and often scolded Robin for the smallest of things. After serving a three year sentence,and Robin now moved back into his own home with his father, Amanda returned home where she found Jared yelling at Robin for not helping him clean up the house. Robin rebuttled, and Jared was infuriated, Jared hit Robin repeatedly across the face. Amanda yelled at Jared to stop, but it would seem, he had gone insane after years on the force. Jared lashed at Amanda, as if he was going to attack. Amanda reacted quickly, she grabbed a kitchen knife and threatened Jared with it. Jared Smith lunged at her and she held out the knife. The knife penetrated Jared in the abdomen, and he fell to the floor. He bled out before paramedics could arrive. Robin witnessed this and was immediately traumatized, and did not speak a word until three years later. Robin did not have many friends, even out of childhood friends, most people have indifference to him, not caring one way or the other about him. Robin tried to apply for a job exactly one year before the combine invasion, but he was denied due to "Personality disorders." This disheartened Robin, furthering his "Issues" After the combine invasion, he went to city 23, where he met up with a young rebel by the name of Brandon Pyles. Brandon felt that if he was kind to Robin, he may be able to think of a way to help the rebels, by using Robin as a decoy. Robin foiled the plan, by reporting the location of the rebels to the MPF. However, despite this good deed, he wound up into more trouble than he bargained for when remnants of the rebel group tried killing Robin. Robin managed to get to City 11. While in city 11, Robin slowly adjusted to the new style of the city, and also its slower pace. For some reason, the MPFs showed a general dislike toward Robin. After being falsely accused of crimes, he was sent to City 18, where he wandered around trying to find a purpose in his new life. Robin made many friends in City 18, and even with his detached personality, became hopeful, and also torn, on whether to apply for the CWU or the MPF.


Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):Citizen is conversing with a large group of citizens. /me attempts to get closer without raising citizen suspicion, and then eavesdrops hoping to hear anti-civi remarks.
/me Thinks about his past, which hardens his heart.
Citizen is complaining about the authority, /me Tells the citizen to do something about it. And smirks under his mask deviously.
/me Sees someone in ration line turn around in line, immediately tells citizen to leave in a harsh tone, if citizen does not comply, I pull out stunstick and scare citizen into leaving.
/me Sees citizen with a gun, radios in for orders on how to handle situation and prevents anything from happening.
Citizen asks if I like my job /me seems extremely detached and replies " I don't like anything, but this is better than anything you'll ever have citizen."
/me Target practicing with rats, shoots all seven of them between the eyes
Sees citizen buying Breen's water, /me tells citizen to drop it and then drinks half the water and tosses the water back at the citizen.
Citizen asks for directions, /me Tells citizen the only directions they need are away from me.
/me Sees citizens fighting, runs over and solves the problem by two warning shots, and then telling them to get against wall, after /roll-ing succesfully I hit them both thrice on the back with a stunstick, spreading each consecutive hit out longer to force anticipation of pain in the citizens
/me Talking to another MPF. MPF asks if I could do anything, what would it be. I reply " I would go back, and kill my father." "But we all have wishes, it's what makes us human."
Why do you want to be MPF?: I think it would be a good experience RP-wise. I always play the underdog, but I would like to try something different.
/me Sees citizen jumping
/y Citizen! Stop that jumping around!
** Citizen walks over with a smug look.
/y Wipe that look of your face citizen! And follow my commands!
** Citizen starts to look angry attempts to attack
** We /roll and I win, I force citizen onto the ground where I tie him, and radio for transport.
/me Searches two citizens for illegal items
/me Salutes the Higher Ranking officer
/me Arrests non-complying citizen.
/me Checks PDA for data on a citizen
During a breach, follows orders given to by a Superior Officer
When CWU store is open, assists the CW on duty by maintaining peace in the store.
/me Does an investigative sweep of apartments.


Why do you want to be MPF?:I would like to be in the MPF because it allows one to role play from a completely different perspective as well as I believe I can use my skills (IC and OOC) to better the city and server. I love the technical and role play opportunity that being in the MPF present and have strived for the opportunity to gain those abilities. I also would like to join the MPF to help deal with minges as I am located in Europa (Sweden) and am online during the U.K. nights when we have our minge problem.


Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes, I do

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?:Yes I do

Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,

and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue..


Last edited by Gimti on Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:07 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Needed to add somethings)

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Re: MPF Application New one

Post  L.Lawliet on Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:46 pm

--SUPPORT
Lack of effort in the backstory that is not 2 paragraphs if you were born during the invasion you would have been killed and you just don't loljoin the rebels or the MPF for the rebels you find them and they might accept you or maybe not and I cant believe i'm saying this again THE MPF ARE NOT COMBINE THEY ARE CALLED MPF FOR A REASON

No effort in the backstory and the RP example does not make sense.
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Sorry bad story

Post  Gimti on Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:08 am

Now I have worked all night with it please look!!!

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Can someone decide me now please!

Post  Gimti on Thu Apr 12, 2012 12:34 pm

Please Decide me

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Re: MPF Application New one

Post  RustyRazor on Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:07 pm

++Support

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Re: MPF Application New one

Post  L.Lawliet on Thu Apr 12, 2012 9:43 pm

RP example is supposed to be in firstperson point of view other than that
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One week

Post  Gimti on Sat Apr 14, 2012 8:29 am

Can somone decide me it has gone one week now!

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Re: MPF Application New one

Post  mhofnagel on Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:28 am

Gimti wrote:Can somone decide me it has gone one week now!

Read the guide on how to apply to factions. <3

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