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Those blacks

Post  blackhater223 on Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:00 am

Blacks.
Can't live with 'em,


Last edited by CakeBones on Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:08 am; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : I just hate 'em.)

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Damn it ;(

Post  blackhater223 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 8:40 am

Why won't any admins look at my application?
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Re: Those blacks

Post  krazyoz101 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:48 pm

+SUPPORT

Well written

Good examples of RP

Over all A very mature Application.

Hope you make it Very Happy

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Re: Those blacks

Post  Fox McCloud on Mon Apr 09, 2012 8:07 pm

Back story is pretty good, personally Id like to see a bit more expansion.

The role play I'd like to see more descriptive and in depth, its a bit better than vanilla, but it still needs a little work.

I like the first line of voice, for the rest of them show more of that accent and strange speech; I know its a little tedious, but it really adds allot.

I'm gonna go ahead and just say +/- neutral support for now just cause I'd like to see at least the RP and vocals worked on a bit.
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Re: Those blacks

Post  Jawa108 on Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:06 pm

I like It, could've had a longer, more descriptive backstory, But it is nice. Not too sure about the name, can't picture or relate it to vortigauntIsh if you know what I mean. Other than that, nice app, I like it

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Re: Those blacks

Post  blackhater223 on Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:23 pm

another just got accepted.
And it was just made.
The fuck?

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