Rookie's MPF Application (Revised)

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Rookie's MPF Application (Revised)

Post  Rookie on Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:48 pm

Steam Name And ID: [CDAF] Rookie STEAM_0:1:32995390

In-Game Main Character Name: Alexander Norbert

How long have you played on the server?: About Two Weeks

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph): Alexander Norbert was born in a small town in Germany, During birth his mother had died in the process. Alex Had Grown up in a town with alot of crime. But He lived a normal live With his Father and Sister untill he was 12, when he had to defend himself from a local group of gangsters in the city. They had tried to Attack Alex well his Family was away from him. It was the first time Alexander had ever killed somebody. 2 Injurys counting his father. and 1 death.Luckily his Dad had noticed and fought them off. Afterwards his Dad was Pretty banged up. His Father had died before he and his Sister could Drag him to the nearby Hospital.

After that event Alex started having Nightmares when he was around 23, evreytime he slept he had dreams about his fathers death. At 26 Years old Alex had joined the U.S Military. Alex had always wanted to be a Soldier from the Herioc stories about his father he heard all around Germany. Before his Discharge from the Army he had heard a Rumor that the same group of thugs and Gangs where hiding in the Strange city 18. Now 31 years old in City 18 he and his Sister, Emma Norbert Hear that the Gangsters run a local group in City 18. Alex now Wants to Apply for MPF to Get Revenge for his Father and establish Justice in City 18.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):
(Citizen Starts Running in the Plazza)
Me: Citizen! Halt!
Citzen: Yes Officer?
Me: Your Aware you Where Running in The Plazza?
Citizen: Oh Yes! Sorry Officer! i was going to meet someone.
Me:Someone? Who?
Citizen: Oh! um..Just a friend!
Me: Wall, now.
/me Tries to Tie up the Suspect Resist?
/me Searches the suspect
/me radio in if i should take the Citizen in for Questioning due to Suspicious Activity



I Would Patrol the Plaza and try to talk to other MPF Members

/me runs the Rations
Me: Citizen!
Me: Apply!
(Citizen gives Name and id number)
/me checks the data and id numbers and see if Evreything checks out
/me gives the Citizen his or her Rations
Me: Next!

Why do you want to be MPF?: I've Seen Other Players RP as MPF and i though it looked Fun. and would be a Fun way to change up my RP Experience

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes
Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?: I do

Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,

and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue.

Rookie
Member
Member

Posts : 2
Join date : 2012-03-31

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Re: Rookie's MPF Application (Revised)

Post  Burningfox6 on Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:24 am

DENIED. Not enough actions and not a good detailed backstory, due to the empty plot-holes.
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Posts : 148
Join date : 2012-02-06
Age : 29
Location : Canada, eh?

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