Fidel Castro's MPF APP (EDITED)

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Fidel Castro's MPF APP (EDITED)

Post  FidelCastro on Fri Apr 06, 2012 3:05 am

Steam Name:
[NK] Fidel Castro

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:37687708


In-Game Main Character Name:
Lukas Schikler
How long have you played on the server?:
About 4 day to a week now (Ive had months worth of experiance on servers like it, though.)

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):
James has long since loathed the existance of most other Human beings. Even in his childhood he had practically no friends and tended to be the bully in school who everyone was affriad of. This odd behavior can be the effect of the abusive home from which he came, where his drunk of a Step-Father would almost conastantly start fights with his whore of a mother. Most of these arugments somehow ended up with James getting the blame and a violent beating. Due to the lack of any moral guidance, James quickly became a cold, angry, and mostly unforgiving person who only got along with people who shared his hate for others.
Over the years, James' hatred for Humanity festered and grew more and more promedent until he finally snapped. In the middle of a October night when James was just about to turn 19, he stole his Step-fathers pistol and murdered both him and his mother in their sleep. Once the Combine invaided Earth and won the seven hour war, James quickly saw potential in their genorous offer to join the Metropolice force and capitalized on it. Once James had managed to join the MPF, he moved city to city starting with City 56, then on to City 43, finally ending in City 18 where he currently resides. He isnt the most liked Officer especially by the local resistance and tends to be rather evil to all people besides other MPF officers.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):
*Upon seeing a group of Citizens meeting in the city square*
/me walks over and removes the stunstick from his hip with a small chuckle.
"Isolate."
/me Flicks the stunstick on and strikes a menacing pose.

*After a Citizen who is against the wall refuses to apply and I win the roll*
/me draws his stunstick and flicks it on with a grin. The tip began to glow and James hovers it not an inch over their spine.
"I said to apply..."
/me slowly leans the stunsitck closer and closer to the civilians back untill the electricity causes all of the hair on the Citizens back to stand up striaght.
"Do you still want to resist?"
*Citizen applys*

*While in the firing range using the standard 9mm pistol*
/me aims down sights before squeezing the trigger twice, puting one bullet in each of the targets 'kneecaps'.
/me points the pistol slightly higher and pulls the trigger two more times, putting one bullet in the targets 'chest' and the other in the targets 'head'.

*AntiCitizen starting a fight with another citizen. It becomes physical and i rush over.*
"AntiCitizen! Wall, now!"
*Citizen atempts to flee. AntiCitizen Rolls [47/100]. MPF._______._______.______ Rolls [68/100]*
/me pulls his stunstick from his hip and then grips the AntiCitizen by the arm before slaming him into the wall.
"Apply!"

*Citizen is complaining about occupation.*
/me walks over and grins under his helmet.
"Wall, now!"
*Citizen turns to face wall*
/me atempts to tie.
*Citizen doesnt fight back*
/me searchs Citizen.
*Finds contraband, a rebel uniform.*
"Contraband. Come with me."
*Roughly takes the AntiCitizen by the arm and forces them back to the Nexus to be interoggated and likely amputated.*

*Citizen complains about rations*
Citizen: "Why do we have to eat this... Noraml food is so much better."
/me walks over and uses his stunstick to knock the rations out of the civilians hands before stomping on them.
MPF._____._____._____: "Keep moving, Citizen."

*Knocks throws a can of Breen water on the ground and then turns to Citizen.*
"Pick up that can, and put it into the garbage... Ha ha ha."

*Citizens are throwing things from the bridge.*
/me walks over and draw his stunstick, but doesnt ignite it.
"AntiCitizen, face the wall."
*AntiCitizen complies*
"Apply."

*A Citizen runs over with a unconcious person in there hands."
Citizen: "Officer, help! My friend is infected!"
/me takes the infected person and brings them into the Nexus before locking them in a quarantine cell.

*I see a man who appears to be a rebel*
/me walks over.
"Citizen, wall."
*Citizen does as instructed.*
/me aptempts to tie
*Citizen doesnt resist.*
"Apply"
*Citizen Applys.*
/me searchs Citizen.
*finds nothing.*
/me Unties the Citizen.
"Get out of here!"


Why do you want to be MPF?: I tend to RP as the rebel or the 'Hero' so i wanted to try to be bad buy for once
. I thought it would be a fun challenge.
Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your
whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?:
Of course.

Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,
and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue


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Post  Fox McCloud on Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:22 am

I like your back story, its different and really gives a good reason for wanting to join the MPF.
I also like your role-play, your last example is a little weak, but other than that I think its great!

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Re: Fidel Castro's MPF APP (EDITED)

Post  Spectre Once-ler on Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:06 pm

FidelCastro wrote:Steam Name:
[NK] Fidel Castro

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:37687708


In-Game Main Character Name:
James Vazzini
How long have you played on the server?:
About 4 day to a week now (Ive had months worth of experiance on servers like it, though.)

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):
James has long since loathed the existance of most other Human beings. Even in his childhood he had practically no friends and tended to be the bully in school who everyone was affriad of. This odd behavior can be the effect of the abusive home from which he came, where his drunk of a Step-Father would almost conastantly start fights with his whore of a mother. Most of these arugments somehow ended up with James getting the blame and a violent beating. Due to the lack of any moral guidance, James quickly became a cold, angry, and mostly unforgiving person who only got along with people who shared his hate for others.
Over the years, James' hatred for Humanity festered and grew more and more promedent until he finally snapped. In the middle of a October night, he stole his Step-fathers pistol and murdered both him and his mother in their sleep. Once the Combine invaided Earth and won the seven hour war, James quickly saw potential in their genorous offer to join the Metropolice force and capitalized on it. James is now extremely excited for his new job and cannot wait until he is surrounded by peers who dislike Humanity just as much as he does.
I hope that James was atleast 18 when the combine invaded. Also, I'd like a bit more from after the war. Pre-war is boring. :c

Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10):
*Upon seeing a group of Citizens meeting in the city square*
/me walks over and removes the stunstick from his hip with a small chuckle.
"Isolate."
/me Flicks the stunstick on and strikes a menacing pose.

*After a Citizen who is against the wall refuses to apply and I win the roll*
/me draws his stunstick and flicks it on with a grin. The tip began to glow and James hovers it not an inch over their spine.
"I said to apply..."
/me slowly touches the ignited stunstick to the Civilian's back and holds it there for a moment before pulling it away with a manic laugh.
Depending on your rank, you wouldn't do that. No one basically would, except if they're mentally crazy, when they're below 02, but when above 02, you won't either, because you're brainwashed.

*While in the firing range using the standard 9mm pistol*
/me aims down sights before squeezing the trigger twice, puting one bullet in each of the targets 'kneecaps'.
/me points the pistol slightly higher and pulls the trigger two more times, putting one bullet in the targets 'chest' and the other in the targets 'head'.

*AntiCitizen starting a fight with another citizen. It becomes physical and i rush over.*
"AntiCitizen! Wall, now!"
*Citizen atempts to flee. AntiCitizen Rolls [47/100]. MPF._______._______.______ Rolls [68/100]*
/me pulls his stunstick from his hip and then grips the AntiCitizen by the arm before slaming him into the wall.
"Apply!"

*Citizen is complaining about occupation.*
/me walks over and grins under his helmet.
"Wall, now!"
*Citizen turns to face wall*
/me atempts to tie.
*Citizen doesnt fight back*
/me searchs Citizen.
*Finds contraband, a rebel uniform.*
"Amputate."
*Amputates the Citizen and then brings the rebel uniforms to the Nexus.*
The citizen would had been taken in and interrogated by the MPF, instead of an instant amputation. That is basic knowledge, since the CPs want to know more from the resistance.

*Citizen complains about rations*
Citizen: "Why do we have to eat this... Noraml food is so much better."
/me walks over and uses his stunstick to knock the rations out of the civilians hands before stomping on them.
MPF._____._____._____: "Keep moving, Citizen."

*Knocks throws a can of Breen water on the ground and then turns to Citizen.*
"Pick up that can, and put it into the garbage... Ha ha ha."

*Citizens are throwing things from the bridge.*
/me walks over and draw his stunstick, but doesnt ignite it.
"AntiCitizen, face the wall."
*AntiCitizen complies*
"Apply."

*A Citizen runs over with a unconcious person in there hands."
Citizen: "Officer, help! My friend is infected!"
/me takes the infected person and brings them into the Nexus before locking them in a quarantine cell.

*I see a man who appears to be a rebel*
/me walks over.
"Citizen, wall."
*Citizen does as instructed.*
/me aptempts to tie
*Citizen doesnt resist.*
"Apply"
*Citizen Applys.*
/me searchs Citizen.
*finds nothing.*
/me Unties the Citizen.
"Get out of here!"


Why do you want to be MPF?: I tend to RP as the rebel or the 'Hero' so i wanted to try to be the souless bad guy for once*. I thought it would be a fun challenge.
Souless bad guy, you say?
That would only happen after OfC, which is nearly impossible at the moment, since we have so many high ranks, but good luck.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your
whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?:
Of course.

Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,
and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue
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Post  Burningfox6 on Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:58 am

I sense Mini-Hitler. Denied.
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