BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

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BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  BasicReference on Fri Apr 06, 2012 1:34 am

Steam Name And ID: BasicRefrence (Misspelled on purpose)

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:25203831

In-Game Main Character Name: Ronald Scott

How long have you played on the server?: A little longer than a week

Character Backstory (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph): Ronald Scott was born in Chicago, Illinois. He was born August 19, 1976. Ronald Scott lived an average life until the age of 12. His Father ( Joshua Scott) was a police officer before the Combine invasion, and his mother was a social worker. One day his father came home from work, and found illegal substances in Martha Scott's (Ronald's Mom) Purse. Even though Ronald's father did not want to do it, he had to detain Martha. But Martha fought back, forcing Joshua Scott to use non-lethal force. Joshua Scott shot Martha with a Taser, and she fell to the ground. As Josh was escorting Martha into the squad car, she told Ronald not to worry, that it would all be sorted out. Ronald lived with his grandparents for three years, because his father could not take care of him alone. Joshua blamed Ronald for Martha's habits and hated Ronald for it, and often scolded Ronald for the smallest of things. After serving a three year sentence,and Ronald now moved back into his own home with his father, Martha returned home where she found Joshua yelling at Ronald for not helping him clean up the house. Ronald rebuttled, and Josh was infuriated, Josh hit Ronald repeatedly across the face. Martha yelled at Josh to stop, but it would seem, he had gone insane after years on the force. Josh lashed at Martha, as if he was going to attack. Martha reacted quickly, she grabbed a kitchen knife and threatened Joshua with it. Josh Scott lunged at her and she held out the knife. The knife penetrated Josh in the abdomen, and he fell to the floor. He bled out before paramedics could arrive. Ronald witnessed this and was immediately traumatized, and did not speak a word until three years later. Ronald did not have many friends, even out of childhood friends, most people have indifference to him, not caring one way or the other about him. Ronald tried to apply for a job exactly one year before the combine invasion, but he was denied due to "Personality disorders." This disheartened Ronald, furthering his "Issues" After the combine invasion, he went to city 23, where he met up with a young rebel by the name of Brandon Pyles. Brandon felt that if he was kind to Ronald, he may be able to think of a way to help the rebels, by using Ronald as a decoy. Ronald foiled the plan, by reporting the location of the rebels to the MPF. However, despite this good deed, he wound up into more trouble than he bargained for when remnants of the rebel group tried killing Ronald. Ronald managed to get to City 11. While in city 11, Ronald slowly adjusted to the new style of the city, and also its slower pace. For some reason, the MPFs showed a general dislike toward Ronald. After being falsely accused of crimes, he was sent to City 18, where he wandered around trying to find a purpose in his new life. Ronald made many friends in City 18, and even with his detached personality, became hopeful, and also torn, on whether to apply for the CWU or the MPF.

Ronald's personality is made up of several factors, one of which being authoritarian, which he undoubtedly picked up from his father. Ronald is also very suspicious of others, and at times very cynical. Ronald is very loyal to those who he feels deserve it. Ronald is very cooperative, and will stop at nothing to accomplish a task. Ronald's Criminal record is extremely clean, witnessing first hand what happens when you do not obey. Ronald Even though Ronald seems friendly at first, this is just a decoy due to his cynical nature, he is distrustful of people whom he just met, unless they rank higher than him on a social scale. On an emotional level, Ronald seems very detached and hard-of-heart. Even though Ronald seems like he has a metal disorder such as Psychopathy, he is actually just trapped in a shell of a broken man.


Examples of actions you would do In-Game (Minimum 10): ** Citizen is conversing with a large group of citizens. /me attempts to get closer without raising citizen suspicion, and then eavesdrops hoping to hear anti-civi remarks.
/me Thinks about his past, which hardens his heart.
Citizen is complaining about the authority, /me Tells the citizen to do something about it. And smirks under his mask deviously.
/me Sees someone in ration line turn around in line, immediately tells citizen to leave in a harsh tone, if citizen does not comply, I pull out stunstick and scare citizen into leaving.
/me Sees citizen with a gun, radios in for orders on how to handle situation and prevents anything from happening.
Citizen asks if I like my job /me seems extremely detached and replies " I don't like anything, but this is better than anything you'll ever have citizen."
/me Target practicing with rats, shoots all seven of them between the eyes
Sees citizen buying Breen's water, /me tells citizen to drop it and then drinks half the water and tosses the water back at the citizen.
Citizen asks for directions, /me Tells citizen the only directions they need are away from me.
/me Sees citizens fighting, runs over and solves the problem by two warning shots, and then telling them to get against wall, after /roll-ing succesfully I hit them both thrice on the back with a stunstick, spreading each consecutive hit out longer to force anticipation of pain in the citizens
/me Talking to another MPF. MPF asks if I could do anything, what would it be. I reply " I would go back, and kill my father." "But we all have wishes, it's what makes us human."
Why do you want to be MPF?: I think it would be a good experience RP-wise. I always play the underdog, but I would like to try something different.
/me Sees citizen jumping
/y Citizen! Stop that jumping around!
** Citizen walks over with a smug look.
/y Wipe that look of your face citizen! And follow my commands!
** Citizen starts to look angry attempts to attack
** We /roll and I win, I force citizen onto the ground where I tie him, and radio for transport.
/me Searches two citizens for illegal items
/me Salutes the Higher Ranking officer
/me Arrests non-complying citizen.
/me Checks PDA for data on a citizen
During a breach, follows orders given to by a Superior Officer
When CWU store is open, assists the CW on duty by maintaining peace in the store.
/me Does an investigative sweep of apartments.

Citizen has an arrest warrant, radios in, and transports to Nexus cell.
Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your

whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes

Do you understand that if you show traitorous actions and traits you will be amputated and PKed?:Yes

Do not go Rogue without my authorization! (Burningfox6). Also, If I'm not on, ask someone to ask me,

and just try to get your rank to 04 before you go Rogue.


Last edited by BasicReference on Fri Apr 06, 2012 4:05 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Added more to Backstory, and fixed the RP elements.)

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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  Fox McCloud on Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:21 am

Your back-story is pretty generic and non-developed and your role-play is so-so.

I'm giving -support for this application.

Edit: The role play and the back story look good to me now, I give + support


Last edited by Fox McCloud on Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:37 am; edited 1 time in total
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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  Spectre Once-ler on Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:33 am

The RP example is kind of flat and could use a bit more work.
This is NEUTRAL until revised.
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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  BasicReference on Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:05 pm

Okay, I have developed the backstory more, as well as added more and better RP situations. If there is anything else I should add, tell me.

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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  Vizurez on Fri Apr 06, 2012 9:31 pm

Looks very interesting and well presented now that you've edited it, it's a +Support from me.
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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  BR Reconz on Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:23 pm

I love your RP backstory. I feel as though it's very indepth. + Support. I hope you make it!

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Re: BasicReference's Super- Revised MPF Application

Post  Burningfox6 on Sat Apr 07, 2012 1:34 am

ACCEPTED. Amazing, touching, compelling, saddening.
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