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Post  COMPANION---CUBE on Wed Mar 21, 2012 11:12 pm

Steam Name And ID: falloutboy413 Steam ID
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In-Game Main Character Name: Shi'nouma

How long have you played on the server?: 1 month

Character Backstory: (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):
He came from his home planet and was assigned to be a biotic slave, he did not approve of this but he had to do it, if he said no he would be exiled from the solar system. He landed on earth, at first he had some breathing issues because of the change of oxygen levels, after his body had adjusted to the temperatures and conditions he began work. It was proving difficult in the first few months of work but he had to make the best of it. He was glad that no CP's had been mean to him since he came and that was the only thing that he could even be remotely glad about.

Months later a new SEC come to the city and wanted to speak with Shi'nouma, in the SEC office the SEC himself gave the vort strict rules to follow, one of them was that he couldn't even make eye contact or speak with any of the other units. The new SEC as time went on became worse and started to physically abuse the vort, his life became a mess. All of the other units had things to say about the way he was treated and some wanted to speak to the new SEC but no-one dared in fear that they could end up in the posistion of the vort. After 4 years of this Shi'nouma received news that he would be getting relocated to City 45 he was pleased to hear this, but everything that happened to him is trapped in his mind as a life long memory, he tries to hide it but sometimes it overcomes him and troubles him.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game: (minimum : /me makes strange sounds that sound like a vort pray
/me shakes with fear as CP's walk up to him
/me looks away from SEC with some memorys being triggered and causing him to shake
/me cleans window using to biotic powers to lift rag
/me ignores as citizen taunts him looking away with neglect
/me looks confused at CP while he gives him complex instructions
/me Walks around while shackles rattle around
/me shock collar goes off causing in to go unconscious
/me uses biotic powers to lift heavy object to move out of way
/me walks with a limp from shock collar shocking him
/me groans with pain from beating received from CP
/me looks around nervously as citizens stare at him

Example of speech you would use in-game: (minimum 6): 1- As you wish
2. I will do as you say
3. I'm afraid I don't understand what you mean
4. I will take my punishment with great sorrow
5. The Combine are my leaders I can't believe they put me in this position.
6. I am forbidden to talk with "private matters" to citizens
7. I can't preform what you ask of me.

Why do you want to be a Vortigaunt?: I thought it would be a change from being a citizen or a MPF so I'm trying to be a vort for a different experience.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes, I fully understand.


Last edited by Connor Murphy on Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:36 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Problems with last)
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Post  Renzo on Thu Mar 22, 2012 8:16 am

Connor Murphy wrote:Steam Name And ID: falloutboy413 Steam ID
STEAM_0:1:47017053
In-Game Main Character Name: Shi'nouma

How long have you played on the server?: 1 month

Character Backstory: (Minimum Two Paragraphs (Paragraph: Minimum Four Complete Sentences Per Paragraph):
He came from his home planet and was assigned to be a biotic slave, he did not approve of this but he had to do it, if he said no he would be exiled from the solar system. He landed on earth, at first he had some breathing issues because of the change of oxygen levels, after his body had adjusted to the temperatures and conditions he began work. It was proving difficult in the first few months of work but he had to make the best of it. He was glad that no CP's had been mean to him since he came and that was the only thing that he could even be remotely glad about.

Months later a new SEC come to the city and wanted to speak with Shi'nouma, in the SEC office the SEC himself gave the vort strict rules to follow, one of them was that he couldn't even make eye contact or speak with any of the other units. The new SEC as time went on became worse and started to physically abuse the vort, his life became a mess. All of the other units had things to say about the way he was treated and some wanted to speak to the new SEC but no-one dared in fear that they could end up in the posistion of the vort. After 4 years of this Shi'nouma received news that he would be getting relocated to City 45 he was pleased to hear this, but everything that happened to him is trapped in his mind as a life long memory, he tries to hide it but sometimes it overcomes him and troubles him.

Examples of actions you would do In-Game: (minimum : /me makes strange sounds that sound like a vort pray
/me shakes with fear
/me looks away from SEC with some memorys being triggered
/me cleans window
/me ignores as citizen taunts him
/me looks confused at CP
More detailed /me's.

Example of speech you would use in-game: (minimum 6): 1- As you wish
2. I will do as you say
3. I'm afraid I don't understand what you mean
4. I will take my punishment with great sorrow
5. The Combine are my leaders I can't believe they put me in this position.
6. I am forbidden to talk with "private matters" to citizens
7. I can't preform what you ask of me.
Why do you want to be a Vortigaunt?:
^ This hasn't been filled out.

Do you understand that if you abuse your rights your character will be banned, you will lose your whitelist, and you may be banned temporarily depending on your actions?: Yes, I fully understand.
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Post  Spectre Once-ler on Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:39 am

But, Renzo.. That's my way of looking at apps ;-;
Also, yeah, you need to fill out that question. And seriously, the /me's are pretty boring and needs to be more detailed..
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Post  COMPANION---CUBE on Thu Mar 22, 2012 7:28 pm

I've edited it
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Post  Renzo on Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:09 pm

You still haven't changed the /me's to be detailed.
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Post  COMPANION---CUBE on Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:32 pm

So I have to edit all the /me's?
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Post  COMPANION---CUBE on Thu Mar 22, 2012 9:36 pm

Is it better now?
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Post  Renzo on Fri Mar 23, 2012 8:50 am

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Post  COMPANION---CUBE on Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:57 pm

Thank you
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Post  Burningfox6 on Fri Mar 23, 2012 9:20 pm

The "N" in Nouma should be capitalized. *Has joined the G.N Squad?*
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Post  Renzo on Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:05 pm

Burningfox6 wrote:The "N" in Nouma should be capitalized. *Has joined the G.N Squad?*

Indeed you have.
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